“This was lazy, even for him.
It’s like 4 pages long, and all that happens is a dude thinks he’s the new Noah, then his house gets blowed up. I think it’s supposed to be Twilight-Zone-y because he thinks he’s going to die, and he does in fact die. But not because of catastrophe, because he stockpiled all this survival shit and animals, and then someone blew everything up for some reason.
One tactic, if you wanted to get a Twilight Zone episode written, would be to just write like a hundred things like this. Eventually one would resemble a story, odds are. “