“Halloween Fiend”

“The first half, maybe even two thirds, were lots of fun. Sorta fell apart at the end for me though. It was a big build up that didn’t quite fulfill the promise.

Basically, there’s a town that’s gotta do a nightly ritual, plus a yearly ritual. For some goddamn reason they invite some outsiders to assist with the fall festival (which is connected to the yearly ritual), but it’s critical the outsiders don’t find out about the ritual. Is that vague enough I don’t have to count this as including spoilers?

I thought there’d be payoff on this, and there really isn’t.

Imagine Independence Day, and when will smith punches that alien in the face, we discover the aliens’ weakness is a good ol fashioned American face punch. Kinda anticlimactic, right? And sorta weird that this conquered race that has spanned galaxies is so easily defeated. Wouldn’t you think someone would’ve thought of that before?

Anyway, that’s kinda what this book is like. Pretty good, but it’s that kid in class capable of a lot more, it’s just that a science teacher can’t grade your crappy project based on your personal potential, they have to grade based on the level of average students, know what I mean.

I should bump this up to a four for the description of a granny in a semi-transparent cat costume dancing around with a diaper visible underneath. Fuck you, I’m entitled to my kinks. “